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(Message started by: Ree on Jan 8th, 2005, 12:16pm)

Title: not my best work but
Post by Ree on Jan 8th, 2005, 12:16pm
Not my best but I thought I would share this... i wrote it about how i feel about my dumb A$$ girlfriends telling me how to feel about what I deal with 24/7

Don't Tell Me How to Feel

Dont tell me how to feel...
He didn't share your life,
He just got the call one day,
Left his kids, His wife.

Don't tell me how to feel...
He didnt come from you,
He grew up free and made me proud
Knew what he had to do.

Don't tell me how to feel...
He did not call you Mom..
He does his job and flies the night
He tells us to be strong

Don't tell me how to feel...
For one day you may know.
Your child may follow my childs steps,
and he may have to go.

Only then will I accept
Advice on whats now real
Until then I  trust my heart
And KNOW just how to feel...

with love Ree



Title: Re: not my best work but
Post by LeLimey on Jan 8th, 2005, 12:19pm
:'( [smiley=hug.gif]
Oh Ree, not a day goes by I don't admire you for your bravery in just getting up each day. That was so powerful thank you for sharing
love
Helen

Title: Re: not my best work but
Post by Jonny on Jan 8th, 2005, 12:34pm
Hey Ree, if those dumbass girlfriends of yours are at least half as good looking as you I will come up there and bang them to DEATH for you.....lemme know ;;D

BTW....Cool poem!!

Title: Re: not my best work but
Post by Ree on Jan 8th, 2005, 12:47pm
jonny man you have such a way with words LOLOL thanks ~~~ and no they ain't as cute as me... hehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehe you gotta think youre 17 to look like this...........

Love Ree who is  lookin her age lately~~~

Title: Re: not my best work but
Post by Redd715 on Jan 8th, 2005, 12:54pm
Lovely Ree...Just lovely...


Title: Re: not my best work but
Post by Langa on Jan 8th, 2005, 1:12pm
I liked it a lot Ree...Thanks for sharing!

Langa

Title: Re: not my best work but
Post by taraann on Jan 8th, 2005, 1:27pm
That is a great poem.  Should be shared with other military moms.

Title: Re: not my best work but
Post by Grandma_Sweet_Boy on Jan 8th, 2005, 2:09pm
Ree - that's beautiful!  There must be a military magazine or something that you could submit that to.

Hope you've shown this to the friends (and I use that term loosely) that try to control your feelings for you.  That's just wrong!

I hope you keep on sharing your wonderfully talented self with us.

Hugs
Carol

Title: Re: not my best work but
Post by Jeepgun on Jan 8th, 2005, 2:09pm
Right on, Ree! What TaraAnn said: This should be shared with other military moms. Fantastic! I think of your son everyday and say a prayer for him. He'll be home and safe again before you know it. :) [smiley=hug.gif] Thank you for sharing this.

-Frank

Title: Re: not my best work but
Post by broomhilda on Jan 8th, 2005, 4:04pm
Thanks for sharing this Ree, it really shows others how you feel when asked those ignorant questions and thoughts...I agree should be shared with others...

Bestest

Title: Re: not my best work but
Post by john_d on Jan 8th, 2005, 4:27pm
nice Ree  :)

Title: Re: not my best work but
Post by Woobie on Jan 8th, 2005, 6:17pm
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very nice, Ree...........


Title: Re: not my best work but
Post by Gator on Jan 8th, 2005, 6:35pm
Very nice, Ree.  Maybe you can get it put in Stars and Stripes Mag.  That's one of the military magazines.  Go for it!

Praying for Scott's safe return.


Mike

Title: Re: not my best work but
Post by Ree on Jan 10th, 2005, 7:39am
Thanks you guys but I have written more like it... They would have to have a mag jussssssssssss for Ree.  Poetry like art is in the eye of the beholder... I have won awards for my poetry and then at times submitted stuff and got rejected........... Its all political like anything else.......... I recieved an email from Scott today kinda scarey but recieved just the same.  He has moved to a darker more dangerous place.  Where in this world isn't dangerous at this point.  I just want him home... Last night I wrote this one... also not my best work but something that tells you where my brain is when we sit and watch TV... Scott once told me that they don't notify next of kin after
10:30 pm ...........

When 10:30 rolls around,
I put another weekday down.
X out another month day block.
That's goal time on our house hold clock.

Until that time each car goes by.
I hold my breath, I close my eyes.
And pray that car will pass our door,
Then go back to my life once more.
 

Love to you guys and thankyou for all of the support you constantly give my boys no matter what your political beliefs are... Ree


Title: Re: not my best work but
Post by nani on Jan 10th, 2005, 7:43am
[smiley=hug.gif]

You're amazing, ree....
I say a prayer for Scott everyday. It doesn't matter what our political beliefs are... I think we all want every one of these kids back...safe and sound and as soon as possible.

Title: Re: not my best work but
Post by OneEyeBlind on Jan 10th, 2005, 8:29am
Ree, the poems are beautiful.  And Scott is in my prayers.

Title: Re: not my best work but
Post by Ree on Jan 10th, 2005, 2:08pm
thanks thanks thanks............ I must be PMSing IM kinda tearful today... Im tough! Im tough! Im tough...!

Love to you guys..........ree

Title: Re: not my best work but
Post by Jeepgun on Jan 10th, 2005, 3:28pm
Tough enough to cry: Maybe the greatest measure of strength, ever.  [smiley=hug.gif]

I agree with Gator: Submit it to Stars & Stripes.

http://www.stripesonline.com/article.asp?section=104&article=25479&archive=true

Title: Re: not my best work but
Post by BarbaraD on Jan 10th, 2005, 8:27pm

on 01/08/05 at 13:27:15, taraann wrote:
That is a great poem.  Should be shared with other military moms.



Ditto

Hugs BD

Title: Re: not my best work but
Post by Ree on Jan 10th, 2005, 8:45pm
Well one of the MOMs at my soldier mom support group said that they would come at any time... She has always been a bummer head and she had to bust the only saving grace I had... a time where life could be mine... people suck ya know that... people just suck...!

I think Scott told me this because he knew I couldn't sleep... I'm going to stick to that... 10:30 is the time.  love ree

Title: Re: not my best work but
Post by LeLimey on Jan 10th, 2005, 8:46pm
Oh Ree, please submit them. The comfort and empathy they will give to others makes them priceless. I love your poems, please share more when you have time
love
Helen

Title: Re: not my best work but
Post by Charlie on Jan 10th, 2005, 10:30pm
I liked it Ree.  

I'm with the others. Submit it to Stars and Stripes or others.

You're sumpin' Ree.

Charlie



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