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Title: The promise
Post by Ghost on Jul 15^th, 2008 at 1:50pm

Hot as the sun,
Sharp as a razor.
Digs in fast,
Fast as a laser.

Skin not damaged,
Left unharmed.
Weak and weary,
No scars to show.

Others I meet,
Beauty they show.
Believe what they say,
Believe what you know.

Gentle and strong,
Tortured and solemn.
Gather they do,
As one they are stronger.

A hug is like gold,
Rich are we all.
A tear is a diamond,
They share with a stranger.

As the time ends,
More tears and hugs given.
Strangers now friends,
My life is worth living.

Mike
7/15/08

Title: Re: The promise
Post by Agostino Leyre on Jul 15^th, 2008 at 2:13pm

Ghost wrote on Jul 15^th, 2008 at 1:50pm:

My life is worth living.

Indeed it is, brother. Nice, thanks!

Title: Re: The promise
Post by DennisM1045 on Jul 15^th, 2008 at 2:50pm

Well done Mike. Thanks for sharing it with us...

-Dennis-

Title: Re: The promise
Post by Jimi on Jul 15^th, 2008 at 2:51pm

Beautiful Mike, just beautiful. Also glad to see you made it back in that raggedy ass truck. ;)

Title: Re: The promise
Post by LeLimey on Jul 15^th, 2008 at 10:22pm

I love it Goatie - I bought your convention poem by the way - it's gone to a good home where it will be loved, framed and hung on the wall

Helen x

Title: Re: The promise
Post by midwestbeth on Jul 16^th, 2008 at 8:23am

I like it. :)

Thanks for sharing that.

Beth

Title: Re: The promise
Post by sandie99 on Jul 16^th, 2008 at 9:10am

Great poem, thank you Mike! :)

Sanna

Title: Re: The promise
Post by swimchica623 on Jul 16^th, 2008 at 2:03pm

very, very nice :)

i like the hug part, hugs from in person meetings are the best. [smiley=hug.gif]

Title: Re: The promise
Post by Melissa on Jul 16^th, 2008 at 3:17pm

I smile because I've been lucky enough to feel what you wrote.

mel
xoxo

Title: Re: The promise
Post by JimLaff on Jul 16^th, 2008 at 5:25pm

Nice!!!!

Title: Re: The promise
Post by Callico on Jul 18^th, 2008 at 4:45pm

Excellent!