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Title: The Victim (Poem)
Post by Broken on Aug 20^th, 2008 at 7:40pm

Been a while since I posted one and I'm in a mood so here's The Victim.

Pop sizzle and crack.
The fire roars eargerly,
awaiting it's poor victim.
Lowered into the heat,
you can hear the screams.
The soft flesh turning
an ugly black brown,
pulling back from the insides.
Boils blisters and sores,
form on the tender skin.
The insides cook and slowly melt,
leaving a hot mess.
Unable to wait any longer,
I pick the vitcim from it's skwer,
and pop the delicious delight,
into my watering mouth.
Sitcky and good, I smile.
I love roasted marshmellows.

;D ;D ;D ;D ;D :D :D :D :D :D God I love being a crazy writer.

Broken

Title: Re: The Victim (Poem)
Post by LeLimey on Aug 20^th, 2008 at 8:20pm

Having recently found out what s'mores are - and never having had one YOU are now in charge of introducing me to them Felicia!! ;D

(can I have one with just marshmallow and no chocolate though please?!)

Title: Re: The Victim (Poem)
Post by midwestbeth on Aug 20^th, 2008 at 8:21pm

sick, twisted, unexpectedly funny.......I like it. ;D

Title: Re: The Victim (Poem)
Post by Jonny on Aug 20^th, 2008 at 8:41pm

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Title: Re: The Victim (Poem)
Post by LeLimey on Aug 20^th, 2008 at 8:44pm

Ummm.. Jonny, it's about MARSHMaLlOWS not a wiener roast you wombat! :-* ;)

Title: Re: The Victim (Poem)
Post by Broken on Aug 20^th, 2008 at 9:30pm

wrote on Aug 20^th, 2008 at 8:20pm:

Helen my darling how you have missed out! Even if I have to roast a marshmellow over a lighter I promise you will get your s'more. And don't put it past me to do it. I've roasted them over a candle before so you never know. ;D And of course you can have yours without chocolate. I'll just be forced to eat it for you. Such a terrible task but I'll do it just for you. ;D

Broken

Title: Re: The Victim (Poem)
Post by thebbz on Aug 21^st, 2008 at 12:47pm

Can I have Helen's chocolate? :P
good ending on the poem.
thebb