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Message started by Redd on Jan 11th, 2009 at 12:22am

Title: Late night musings (warning poetry)
Post by Redd on Jan 11th, 2009 at 12:22am

He serves
I volley

Is this the secret dance?

Where and when.
Here and there.
Is there an ace to the hole?

Score even.
But no one has the upper hand.

It’s just the wait between the matches.
He serves.
I Volley.

A precocious dance between life and pain.

He serves.
I Volley.

Defense, always defense.
He serves I volley.

Always on my guard.
Pretending to stay a step ahead.

Where and when?
He serves I volley.

The never ending game.
It’s a sand trap.

Digging out…
I am my own Captain
My own Queen

If I don’t do this for myself, there is no one to do it for me.

He serves, I volley and I slam dunk the winning blow.

I AM stronger than this menace, this evil spirit that fails to haunt me now.

No matter his battery, I will win.  I am ME, and I am STRONGER than he.

Title: Re: Late night musings (warning poetry)
Post by kayarr on Jan 11th, 2009 at 12:33am
Very nice!

Good imaging.  Thank you for sharing!

Some of the most touching writing is born of pain.

Love to you and yours,
Kimberly

Title: Re: Late night musings (warning poetry)
Post by Frank_W on Jan 12th, 2009 at 11:08am
Nice!! The serve/volley imagery works very well! :)

Title: Re: Late night musings (warning poetry)
Post by debOUCH on Jan 12th, 2009 at 12:46pm
Love it, Pegg!

debs

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