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Title: My First Poem Post by McGee on May 23rd, 2009 at 1:39am
This is my first poem since i left school so many years ago so please be nice to me LOL
The Lord of the Dance. (by McGee) Its time to wake for the shadows call I see them now so dark and tall running down the nearest hill laughing and shouting with joy and thrill. The beast is coming i can hear his song "come dance with me it will be hard and long" "come on now you know it well" "the dance of fire and a thousands hells" But tonight im ready, i am prepared the beast will not have the final word as from the air i make my shield and body armour that will not yield and born of love a sword of might as dance we do till morning light As i push the shadows back into hell the dance is over and i stood up well as my wife comes in "you´ve been dancing again, I can tell" I give her a smile and dry her eyes as i tell her of the beast with his red hot scythe "it was not so bad this dance of mine" "for the Lord of the Dance was I" i hope you like it Mark (poet and all together a good egg) |
Title: Re: My First Poem Post by AussieBrian on May 23rd, 2009 at 4:44am McGee wrote on May 23rd, 2009 at 1:39am:
For the sake of a bit of re-phrasing, it could easily be sung to "Lord of the Dance" by Sidney Carter. Good job, mate, and well done. Specially the bit about you winning! |
Title: Re: My First Poem Post by Lefty on May 23rd, 2009 at 5:53pm McGee wrote on May 23rd, 2009 at 1:39am:
Very cool Mark... [smiley=thumbsup.gif] Lefty...! |
Title: Re: My First Poem Post by Guiseppi on May 23rd, 2009 at 6:38pm
For the sake of a bit of re-phrasing, it could easily be sung to "Lord of the Dance" by Sidney Carter. Funny Brian I was thinking the same thing! Nice job. ;)
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