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The Victim (Poem) (Read 765 times)
Felicia
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The Victim (Poem)
Aug 20th, 2008 at 7:40pm
 
Been a while since I posted one and I'm in a mood so here's The Victim.

Pop sizzle and crack.
The fire roars eargerly,
awaiting it's poor victim.
Lowered into the heat,
you can hear the screams.
The soft flesh turning
an ugly black brown,
pulling back from the insides.
Boils blisters and sores,
form on the tender skin.
The insides cook and slowly melt,
leaving a hot mess.
Unable to wait any longer,
I pick the vitcim from it's skwer,
and pop the delicious delight,
into my watering mouth.
Sitcky and good, I smile.
I love roasted marshmellows.

Grin Grin Grin Grin Grin Cheesy Cheesy Cheesy Cheesy Cheesy God I love being a crazy writer.

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I won't let myself down even if it means I can't make you proud. Its my life I gotta do what I feel is right. No one can stop me now. This clusterhead child is gonna show the world how
Felicia They.Call.Me.Alice little_black_flame@yahoo.com  
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Reply #1 - Aug 20th, 2008 at 8:20pm
 
Having recently found out what s'mores are - and never having had one YOU are now in charge of introducing me to them Felicia!! Grin



(can I have one with just marshmallow and no chocolate though please?!)
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Reply #2 - Aug 20th, 2008 at 8:21pm
 
sick, twisted, unexpectedly funny.......I like it.  Grin
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Reply #3 - Aug 20th, 2008 at 8:41pm
 
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Reply #4 - Aug 20th, 2008 at 8:44pm
 
Ummm.. Jonny, it's about MARSHMaLlOWS not a wiener roast you wombat!
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Felicia
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Re: The Victim (Poem)
Reply #5 - Aug 20th, 2008 at 9:30pm
 
Quote:
Having recently found out what s'mores are - and never having had one YOU are now in charge of introducing me to them Felicia!! Grin



(can I have one with just marshmallow and no chocolate though please?!)


Helen my darling how you have missed out! Even if I have to roast a marshmellow over a lighter I promise you will get your s'more. And don't put it past me to do it. I've roasted them over a candle before so you never know. Grin And of course you can have yours without chocolate. I'll just be forced to eat it for you. Such a terrible task but I'll do it just for you. Grin

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I won't let myself down even if it means I can't make you proud. Its my life I gotta do what I feel is right. No one can stop me now. This clusterhead child is gonna show the world how
Felicia They.Call.Me.Alice little_black_flame@yahoo.com  
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Reply #6 - Aug 21st, 2008 at 12:47pm
 
Can I have Helen's chocolate? Tongue
good ending on the poem.
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