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My First Poem
May 23^rd, 2009 at 1:39am

This is my first poem since i left school so many years ago so please be nice to me LOL

The Lord of the Dance. (by McGee)

Its time to wake for the shadows call
I see them now so dark and tall
running down the nearest hill
laughing and shouting with joy and thrill.

The beast is coming i can hear his song
"come dance with me it will be hard and long"
"come on now you know it well"
"the dance of fire and a thousands hells"

But tonight im ready, i am prepared
the beast will not have the final word
as from the air i make my shield
and body armour that will not yield
and born of love a sword of might
as dance we do till morning light

As i push the shadows back into hell
the dance is over and i stood up well
as my wife comes in "you´ve been dancing again, I can tell"

I give her a smile and dry her eyes
as i tell her of the beast with his red hot scythe
"it was not so bad this dance of mine"
"for the Lord of the Dance was I"

i hope you like it
Mark (poet and all together a good egg)

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AussieBrian CH.com Hall of Famer Offline CH - It's all in your head! Posts: 3851 Cairns, Qld, Australia Gender:	Re: My First Poem Reply #1 - May 23^rd, 2009 at 4:44am McGee wrote on May 23^rd, 2009 at 1:39am: ...so please be nice to me. For the sake of a bit of re-phrasing, it could easily be sung to "Lord of the Dance" by Sidney Carter. Good job, mate, and well done. Specially the bit about you winning!
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Lefty CH.com Alumnus Offline Posts: 759 Gender:	Re: My First Poem Reply #2 - May 23^rd, 2009 at 5:53pm McGee wrote on May 23^rd, 2009 at 1:39am: But tonight im ready, i am prepared the beast will not have the final word as from the air i make my shield and body armour that will not yield and born of love a sword of might as dance we do till morning light Very cool Mark... Lefty...!
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Guiseppi CH.com Moderator CH.com Alumnus Offline San Diego to Florida 05-16-2011 Posts: 12063 SAN DIEGO, CALIFORNIA USA Gender:	Re: My First Poem Reply #3 - May 23^rd, 2009 at 6:38pm For the sake of a bit of re-phrasing, it could easily be sung to "Lord of the Dance" by Sidney Carter. Funny Brian I was thinking the same thing! Nice job. Joe
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