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" When HE Comes "
Mar 26th, 2010 at 9:48pm
 
For most of us the days fill us with cheer, happiness and laughter are always found near.
But there will always be days that leave us numb,
this is when i worry cause" This is when HE comes"

For most of us as beings, The fall winds bring wonderful things. It brings the harvest of Summer
and the fading of greens.
But for me as a one this is when i hide, It may seem
feeble to you or week inside. You can point or snicker, or even say thats dumb, But it just dont matter cause this is "When HE Comes"

There are only a few "HE" has chosen to see, and
i dont understand why "HE" chose me.
I can never out wake him or out last him at night,
"This is when HE comes" so this is when i fight.
I try to stay awake, I leave on the light, I sit and drink coffee all hours of the night. But it never works, My eye's will close, and 10 minutes later the whistle always blows "This is when HE comes"

HE will never leave with just one dance, HE stays for days and week's until my strength, my will and even my soul seems at chance. "When HE comes".

So after our melody of 10 or 20 songs or more, I'm
left battered and beaten on the floor, She scoops me
away to the doctor i see, where he gives me a pill told taken x3 "When HE Comes".
So after some day's of the pills taken x3 HIS music grows soft and i think He's lost me. But HIS song is the same every time it is played, but i can not live in worry, I can not be afraid "When HE Comes". 

Now after a month when i know HE is gone, I'll scream and I'll dance and profess that I've won.
And again I can join the world in spreading my cheer hoping to God HE cant find me next year.
           "When HE Comes".

I wrote this about 5 years ago when i first found this site. I made it a little more of a easy read, and thought i would post it for some of the newcomers.
PLEASE go easy on me (LOL).
Coach Bill
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boy i cant wait till it's my turn to give him a headache. paybacks a bitch
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Reply #1 - Mar 26th, 2010 at 9:56pm
 
This is beautiful and very sad as well. We know where you coming from all too well.
Lots of love and prayers to you and your loving family.

Are you currently cluster free?
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Reply #2 - Mar 26th, 2010 at 10:05pm
 
This site has been a godsend for all of us that suffer mightily when the beast comes.

We're with you Coach, and thanks for the sound advice and lended ear as well. You and plenty of other posters have helped me tremendously.
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Reply #3 - Mar 27th, 2010 at 10:58am
 
Me thinketh coach doth sub as an English Creative Arts Instructor. Nicely done sir.

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"Somebody had to say it" is usually a piss poor excuse to be mean.
 
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Reply #4 - Mar 27th, 2010 at 2:32pm
 
salute!!! coach bill!!!
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Reply #5 - Mar 28th, 2010 at 8:54pm
 
    I like it a lot.  I don't know what else to say.  Sorry I didn't get back to you but I should know, for both reasons,not to make plans outside on rainy days. 
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Reply #6 - Mar 28th, 2010 at 10:04pm
 
Coach Bill, Your poem touched my heart. Thank you for sharing it with all of us.
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Reply #7 - Mar 28th, 2010 at 10:19pm
 
Well Done Coach!!  Well done indeed!!  Thanks for sharing!!

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I am lost and have gone to find myself....if you should see me before I get back....please ask me to wait until I return!!
 
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Reply #8 - Mar 29th, 2010 at 12:21am
 
Well done coach!
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Reply #9 - Mar 29th, 2010 at 12:21am
 
Coach-
That was very well written. I think it hit each and every one of us here in on way or another. Thank you very much for at least one bright spot from the last 24 hours.

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Reply #10 - Mar 29th, 2010 at 8:42am
 
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Reply #11 - Mar 29th, 2010 at 12:20pm
 
Well done my friend, well done.

I couldn't have said it better.  That's why I didn't! Cheesy

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Reply #12 - Nov 5th, 2013 at 9:35pm
 
Found an oldie.
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boy i cant wait till it's my turn to give him a headache. paybacks a bitch
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Reply #13 - Nov 6th, 2013 at 1:08am
 
WOW, that was just beautiful !!

Wish someone could compose music to this.....
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Reply #14 - Nov 6th, 2013 at 9:11am
 
Forgot that one Bill...it STILL stings a little bit!! Wink

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Reply #15 - Nov 6th, 2013 at 7:29pm
 
Nice one, Bill. A good poem always brightens up my day.
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