Posted by bob baker (209.240.222.132) on February 03, 2002 at 14:14:06:
I just wanted to say, Ive seen some great poetry on this site. Just wanted to say good job guys.. keep up the good work.... I'm a fan of poetry.. I've written a few poems myself.. Here is one I wrote about a girl I really liked this past summer.. Off topic, I know.. But who cares.. Let me know what you guys think about it.. It might not display right... THis damn board never lets me paragraph... multiple periods indicate a space between lines..What Did I Do?...........What did I ever do to you that was so bad? ..Why must you continue to make me sad? ..........I told you I loved you, and you knew it was true, ..but why do you do the things that you do? ............You told me you loved me and I was your man,..was this a part of your master plan? ..........You stole my heart, and began to run, ..tell me, is this what you consider having fun? ..........You played me for a fool, who is to blame? ...Should I be mad at whats that kids name? ..........I never understood you, I was always nice, ..but you broke my heart with out thinking twice. ............I really did love you, but you messed with my head, ....at times I thought I was better off dead. ............Your love was painful, and it was very untrue, .....baby girl please tell me, what did i do? ......i was in some pain when i wrote this poem.. Sorry it came out screwy.. It never lets me space in here for some reason..bob